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POSTER AND ESSAY CONTEST - 2009 WINNERS
A selection of posters are available
below. All the winning posters are on display at the Secretary of State's
Office, 26 Terrace Street, Montpelier.
Grades K-2
Winners
Grades K-2 Honorable Mentions
Grades
3-5 Winners
Grades 3-5 Honorable Mention
Grades 6-8 Essay Co-Winners
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K-2 Winners
Individual Winner - Benjamin Carpenter (Homeschool in Poultney)
Butterfly in Red Clover

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Class Winner - Clarendon Elementary School, Ms. Jakubowski's 2nd Grade
Monarch Butterflies

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Grades K-2 Honorable Mentions
Individual - Riley Earle, Bridgewater Village School
Vermont State Seal

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Class - Mr. Bender's 2nd grade, Rutland Public
School
Hermit Thrushes

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Grades 3-5 Posters
Contest on a
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Grade 3-5
Winners
Individual - Emily Ballou,
South Royalton School Calvin Coolidge
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Class - Ms. Baker's 3rd grade, Waitsfield Elementary
School
Scenes from Vermont History


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Grades 3-5 Honorable Mention
Posy LaBombard, Waitsfield Elementary School
Samuel de Champlain

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Grades
6 to 8 Essay
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Co-Winners
Will Adkisson, Browns River Middle School -
Athens vs. America
Anna Riley-Sheppard, Lamoille Union Middle School -
Discussing Vermont's Constitution: Should It Be Easier to Amend?
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Athens vs. America
When
the founding fathers wrote the Constitution, they had a difficult choice
to make. Should they have a true democracy, where the people govern
directly, or should they have a representative democracy, where the
people govern through their elected officials? They chose a
representative system. The Vermont Constitution is equally demonstrative
of this. Voters cannot directly propose amendments to the state
constitution through ballot initiatives, like they can in California and
other states. This is a good thing. If Madison or Jefferson had wanted
us to be able to have free reign in our own constitutions, he would have
written the federal document differently.
In the
Vermont Constitution, an amendment may only be proposed by a Congressman
every four years. Once proposed, 2/3 of the Senate and a majority of the
House must pass it. But even after that, which can be difficult, the
amendment isn’t done. It sits for two years, after which it is again
voted on by the House and Senate. This time, only a majority must vote
for it. Only then is it put to the voters; if a majority of voters
approve it, the amendment is adopted. The general public is only part of
the voting once the proposed amendment has passed the House and Senate
twice. This forces their representatives to propose the amendment, and
to vote on it, before the people can even touch it, which is the very
backbone of our government – a representative democracy, not a true
democracy.
Our
founding fathers were adamant that true democracy is ineffective. As
Alexander Hamilton said, "A pure democracy if it were practicable would
be the most perfect government. Experience has proved that no position
is more false than this. The ancient democracies in which the people
themselves deliberated never possessed one good feature of government.
Their very character was tyranny; their figure deformity...”
The group that wrote the Constitution obviously agreed, because the
federal document is based on that fundamental principle, from the
electoral college to the amendment process. Our government in no way
resembles the ancient true democracies.
Athens
was the one of the few governments that implemented true democracy. But
if their history is examined, they went through constant turmoil,
undergoing coups and revolutions every few decades. There was a revolt
in 510 BC, a coup in 411 (that was overthrown in 403) and constant
warfare. From wars with the Persians to land squabbles with the
Spartans, to the eventual overthrow of the city-state by Alexander the
Great, Rome, the Byzantine Empire, and the Ottoman Empire, Athens was
not a happy place. Interestingly, the word tyrant originated in Greece.
As Hamilton says, “The ancient democracies in which the people
themselves deliberated never possessed one good feature of government.
Their very character was tyranny; their figure deformity.” While Athens
is not a tyranny, as such, his point is clear. Athens had a chaotic
government. Vermont, with its highly limiting amendment process, does
not.
John
Witherspoon, a signer of the Declaration of independence, is equally
eloquent. "Pure democracy cannot subsist long nor be carried far into
the departments of state — it is very subject to caprice and the madness
of popular rage."
In summary: the people aren’t qualified to make their own choices. To
use a real-world example, I was taking a class in which the students
picked a discussion topic – one of a long list of potential apocalypses.
Despite the many interesting topics, such as nuclear warfare and the
effects of a destroyed moon, the majority of the class went with the
joke topics, including the disappearance of chocolate from the world. If
that isn’t the madness of popular rage, I don’t know what is.
But
shouldn’t the people have a voice? Wasn’t the Revolutionary War fought
for liberty and freedom? Yes, it was. But the founding fathers believed
that the people couldn’t govern themselves effectively. I know that I
want someone smarter than me running my country. Representative
democracy strikes a delicate balance: people don’t govern themselves,
but they still have a voice. If the public was meant to truly govern
themselves, we would be living in another Athens. We have chosen a
representative government – we must stand by it, whether in Vermont or
the country as a whole.
So
what does all this have to do with the amendment process? The answer:
Everything. Our founding fathers decided that a true democracy was
ineffective. If we wish to have a successful government, history tells
us that we must eschew true democracy. We must stand by representative
democracy because that is the foundation our government is based on. We
can’t change our minds now, two hundred years later, and say “Sorry,
Jefferson – we’ve decided we’d rather be an Athenian democracy.” This
applies at the state level as well as at the federal, with the amendment
process as well as the legislative branch. If you don’t like it, argue
with Madison.
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Discussing Vermont’s Constitution:
Should It Be Easier To Amend?
If one were to ask the average Vermonter if they
thought it should be easier to amend the Vermont Constitution, they
would most likely reply, “Vermont has a Constitution?”
I apologetically admit that, just a small while ago, I
was one in a crowd of those people. I don’t mean to sound ignorant,
but before my eighth grade social studies class began studying
Vermont’s Constitution, I had no idea it existed. However, I learned
much from my recent studies of it and wonder that it is not discussed
more thoroughly in our state’s schools. After all, our very own Green
Mountain State’s Constitution is one of the strongest in the country,
especially since it was written before the U.S. Constitution and has
lasted from 1777 to the present day.
That being said, let us now turn to the issue of
amending the Constitution. Information about the process can be found
in Chapter II, Section 72. It tells us, “At the biennial session of
the General Assembly of this Senate by a vote of two-thirds of its
member, [senators] may propose amendments to this Constitution, with
the concurrence of a majority of the members of the House of
Representatives with the amendment as proposed by the Senate.”
How complicated! And according to Deb Markowitz,
Secretary of State, “Proposals of amendment can [only] be initiated
every four years by the senate,” and the developments that follow can
take many more years to complete. Then it becomes even more
convoluted. If the idea for the proposal of an amendment passes the
two-thirds vote of the Senate, it still must win a majority vote in
the House to even be suggested to the public as a proposed amendment!
If this prevails, it gets sent back to the Senate and House for
another vote, this time on the actual amendment, and can finally be
transferred to the Vermont voters as a new amendment to the
Constitution. However, if the House and Senate have just one small
disagreement about the specifics of the text, the amendment must be
amended by a specialized Conference Committee, and the whole process
starts again.
This detail of our Constitution has some Vermonters
posing the question, “What happens when we desperately need to pass an
amendment in a rapid manner? It would take years for it to pass!
Shouldn’t it be easier to amend the Vermont Constitution?”
Though I see the rationale for speeding up the
amendment process, I believe it is satisfactory as is. For one thing,
the amending procedure for the Vermont Constitution has been revised
just three times. Either this means that the method of amending is so
complicated that no one can get their proposals through, or it
suggests that the process has simply never needed many changes. I
believe the truth lies with the latter. If the Vermont Constitution
truly and urgently needed amending, I trust we could find a way to
make it happen. Even if this proved impossible we could pass a state
law ensuring that the issue was temporarily taken care of, “until the
real thing came along”.
Now for a
question of history: why did the writers of the Vermont Constitution
choose to make such a difficult Constitution to amend? Truly, in
comparison to ours, the U.S. Constitution is amazingly easy to revise.
There, an amendment can be proposed at any given time by a two-thirds
vote of both houses of Congress or by a national convention called at
the request of two-thirds of state legislatures.
If you think this sounds easy, just look at
California’s Constitution. Amendments can be brought up anytime and,
if they are voted in for a proposal, the state Legislature must
provide a convention to vote on it within six months time. Also,
Article 18, Section 4, reads, “A proposed amendment or revision shall
be submitted to the electors and if approved by a majority of votes
thereon takes effect the day after the election…”
At the other end of the spectrum lies New York. The
amendment process of this Constitution is quite strict. Any amendment
suggested to and voted on by both the House and the Senate, with a
positive outcome, must then be sent to the attorney-general. If the
attorney-general approves of the Bill, he then has no more than twenty
days to review it and write a letter to the Legislature concerning his
opinion on the topic. Assuming this happens, the Bill goes through
many more incarnations of the House and Senate before finally being
proposed to the people for them to vote on. Now that is what I call
tough!
This
brings me to my final point: where is the fine line between a law and
an actual amendment? Most of the concerns of Vermonters could probably
be assuaged by a simple law instead of an entire amendment. States
laws can be passed quickly and without trouble and wouldn’t carry the
heavy load of an actual amendment. Also, as Marielle Rousseau, the
former winner of an essay contest about the Vermont State
Constitution, says, “Vermont’s Constitution has been in place for 227
(now 231) years and it has never served us wrong in this period of
time. Its complicated process benefits us, as we can see from the fact
that the Constitution has rarely needed amending, and if we were to
change this process, we would no doubt be harming our law making
process.”
Our
Constitution has done a good job taking care of Vermont. I don’t
believe it needs many changes, and most alterations Vermonters think
of are fixable by creating a law. The long process of amending the
Constitution ensures that we don’t make any decisions we will later
regret, and that is definitely a good thing.
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